Friday, October 30, 2009

Thursday's 15 Words Or Less


Moments from.....
by stu pidasso
30Oct2009

Sandcastles
eroding gently,
as beach apes
stroll away,
here I lay,
on display,
remnants of
existence.

5 comments:

  1. This is wonderful.

    Just wonderful.

    My family and I were at the beach for our last weekend of the summer recently. Amazing how you seemed to capture the experience in just a few lines of text.

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  2. this is great...and I love the pic.

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  3. I love this. In just sixteen words, so beautifully rendered.

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  4. and an acrostic too!

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  5. I never saw such! Forgive me. I am so dense! Of course 'Seashore'. Anon and you are the ones with a brain, I am not!

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