Note: Only one soul was tortured during the writing of this poem and he will survive. I do not recommend that amateurs try this at home.
Her Kiss
Driving into Travis County, on Interstate 95
It was cold and wet and misty; but it felt great to be alive.
I’d been to Bastrop to see my woman and a kiss was all I got,
And she may not realize it but that kiss sure meant a lot.
Because her kiss is sweeter than any carmel popcorn
And stronger than any dragon that has walked the earth
I wouldn’t trade it for chocolates, money or venison
Anyone who’s had her kiss knows exactly what they’re worth.
But to me that kiss is priceless
And it made my whole world right
Because it reminds me why I stay my course,
Go to work and fight the fight.
Because under overwhelming odds
And obstacles by the score
She puts her kids, family and loved ones first
Even when it brings struggles all the more.
By providing me with that example
In an always cheerful and gracious way
She gently gives me my reminder
To call and tell my kids, "I love you", each day.
stu pidasso
November 14th, 2004
November 14th, 2004
WHOA! She should be very proud.
ReplyDeleteA kiss I'd trade for chocloates would have to be ONE POWERFUL kiss!
Seriously.
Oh that is lovely. Really truely. I am not such a one for obvious rhymes, but this works for me in a way others I have read, do not! Perhaps t is becuase of the story woven through your words. Whatever, I am liking this kiss; muchly.
ReplyDeleteBTW Yes Stu, pretty much, but then I do have a vivid imagination too *wink*
http://wwwwherethewindblows.blogspot.com/2009/03/lsd-shattered-illusions.html
ReplyDeleteSee what I mean?